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Re: Dialogue Help
« on: May 08, 2013, 10:23:23 am »
Dialog alterations so far:

Richard "KarjamP" de Goede:

Represents KarjamP. Also appears in the intro cutscene.

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RICHARD: I guess this world's part of Variant 0. //original

RICHARD: This appears to be in the same world as the Dragon Rider series. //Altered

RICHARD: This appears to be in the same world as the Shane's Cave Story series. //Variant


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//original

< The Purple Karjam appears - yes, he's sort-of important to the story >

PURPLE KARJAM: Quote and Curly did manage to evacuate the city, but sadly, Nega-Lime Karjam destroyed it before the two robots could escape.

KAIRI: Figured you'd show up in time. What brings you here?

PURPLE KARJAM: I suspect that the mysterious disappearance of Shané could, perhaps, be linked to a plot of Nega-Lime Karjam.

SERENITY: Huh. Well, who knows...

PURPLE KARJAM: ... Of course, who knows what Author Shane is planning. For all we know, it could end up to be some guy named Pacen.

KAIRI: Pacen's the Dark One, if I remember correctly...

SERENITY: Let's just work on rebuilding the town. Could you help out, Purple?

PURPLE KARJAM: If I did, everyone would have become lazy eventually. It's best not to let THAT happen, though.

KAIRI: El, oh, el.

SERENITY: Was that supposed to be "lol"?

KAIRI: Yes. I'm just horrible at that kind of thing.

//altered

KAIRI: Quote and Curly died trying to stop that green guy from... well, destroying a Surfacian city, right?

< The Purple Karjam appears - yes, he's sort-of important to the story >

PURPLE KARJAM: Those two robots did managed to evacuate the city. Unfortunately, Nega-lime destroyed it before they could get out themselves

KAIRI: Figured you'd show up in time. What brings you here?

PURPLE KARJAM: I think Shané’s disappearance could be link to Nega-Lime’s current plot.

SERENITY: Huh. Well, who knows...

PURPLE KARJAM: ...Yeah. Who knows what the Author of this story’s planning. In fact, it could even be a guy named Pacen who could’ve done it.

KAIRI: Pacen's the Dark One, if I remember correctly...

SERENITY: Let's just work on rebuilding the town. Could you help out, Purple?

PURPLE KARJAM: Sorry, but I would only use my powers to help you if there’s no other choice. I want others to figure stuff out for themselves lest they
become entirely dependant on me to do everything. It’s best to not let that happen.

KAIRI: El, oh, el.

SERENITY: Was that supposed to be "lol"?

KAIRI: Yes. I'm just horrible at that kind of thing.



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< camera focuses on the Purple Karjam >

//Altered

?: Is it ready?

PURPLE KARJAM: Not yet. I couldn't find her.

?: Shané?

PURPLE KARJAM: Yes. She's been gone since two days ago, and I can't seem to find her.

?: Have you tried looking in the ground

PURPLE KARJAM: I don't think she'd be buried.

?: I have reason to suspect that she's in a secret cave, so consealed that even we couldn't find her.

< ground shakes >

?: What the heck?

PURPLE KARJAM: It looks like a cavern is rising over there!

?: Maybe Shané's there?

PURPLE KARJAM: Well, my senses are failing me there, so that could be true.

PURPLE KARJAM: It's possible that the place's enchanted to conceal any form of life there

?: Are you going to rush now, PK?

PURPLE KARJAM: You're Joking, Richard.

RICHARD: I know. What's that behind you?

< Purple Karjam takes two steps right >

PURPLE KARJAM: That's wierd. My sensor's failing me over there as well.

RICHARD: So what now?

< Purple Karjam turns around >

PURPLE KARJAM: Well, I could always work around needing to search in two locations by sending a clone to one and me going another way

RICHARD: That's great! Let’s get going now!

PURPLE KARJAM: Okay, Mr. Impatient.

//Original

< camera focuses on the Purple Karjam >

?: Is it ready?

PURPLE KARJAM: Not yet. I can't find her.

?: Shané?

PURPLE KARJAM: Yes. She's been missing since two days ago, and I've been unable to find her since then.

?: Have you tried looking under the ground?

PURPLE KARJAM: I don't think she's buried.

?: I have reason to suspect that she's inside a secret cave, so well-hidden that not even we can find her.

< ground shakes >

?: What the?

PURPLE KARJAM: It looks like a cavern of some sort is rising up over there!

?: Maybe Shané's there?

PURPLE KARJAM: Well, I can't sense anything inside, so maybe that's true.

PURPLE KARJAM: Maybe there's some sort of sspell on it that... prevents us from detecting life forms in there?

?: Aren't you going to hurry up?

PURPLE KARJAM: You're not serious, Richard.

RICHARD: I know. And what's that?

PURPLE KARJAM: Huh?

RICHARD: Behind you?

< Purple Karjam takes two steps right >

PURPLE KARJAM: That's new! I can't sense any life forms there, either!

RICHARD: So now what?

< Purple Karjam turns around >

PURPLE KARJAM: Well, I can always send a clone to that area, and then go to those caves myself.

RICHARD: That's a good idea. So get going already!

PURPLE KARJAM: Wow, talk about impatient...



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//original

RICHARD: You did a good job in stopping the Critter invasion...

RICHARD: I wonder why they wore those weird masks, though.

//altered

RICHARD: You did a great job stopping those Critters

RICHARD: Those weird masks cause me to wonder what were they going to do...



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//original

PURPLE KARJAM: Hi! I'm the Purple Karjam.

PURPLE KARJAM: I would have been across the lake in the full version of this mod, but Author Shane has instead decided

to move me here.

PURPLE KARJAM: His laziness is worse than that of one of my friends, from Esiësia.

//altered

PURPLE KARJAM: Hello! I'm the Purple Karjam.

PURPLE KARJAM: In the full version of this mod, I would be across the lake, but Author Shane had decided to instead put me here.

PURPLE KARJAM: He’s even lazier than one of my friends from Esiësia.



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//original

RICHARD: Stupid earthquakes. Author Shane never told me that those would happen, either!

//altered

RICHARD: darn earthquakes! Author Shane never mentioned these two!



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//original

PURPLE KARJAM: Okay, so Author Shane is NOT as lazy as I thought he was.

PURPLE KARJAM: He's still lazy, though.

//altered

PURPLE KARJAM: I stand corrected about how big Author Shane’s laziness is.

PURPLE KARJAM: He’s still at least a bit lazy, of course.

EDIT BY SHANE:
The layout of the page due to the Code BBCode was sort-of annoying me.
« Last Edit: May 28, 2013, 12:45:24 pm by WJM Shane »


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