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Dialogue Help
« on: April 26, 2013, 10:19:56 am »
Yes, I need help regarding dialogue so that the people don't come up as boring same-personality people. If anyone wants to volunteer, just post in this thread the characters that you'd like to give dialogue to.

Obviously I'll credit you, so don't worry about that. I always credit those who help out on my projects, no matter how little the help is. Honour before reason, right? :P

CHARACTERSDialogue WriterCHARACTERSDialogue WriterCHARACTERSDialogue WriterCHARACTERSDialogue WriterCHARACTERSDialogue Writer
ShanéShaneChanellePolarisZexion UchihaEgregious OneSerenity ---- Reverie (represents Kanpachi)Kanpachi
The Purple KarjamKarjamPRichard (represents KarjamP)KarjamPErin Molony ---- SparklePolarisSousuke Sagara (represents Egregious One)Egregious One
AVQ HeroTaylorAVQ HeroineTaylorTifa ---- Naturia ---- Mystery Mines Sage (Frost)Egregious One
Alexandra ---- KairiPolarisGina ---- RileyPolarisUnnamed Guard ----
GMG 1 / IrmaTaylorGMG 2 / Adriana ---- NoxiCritter King (Frost)XiphosOrochi666Shane (as himself) Shane KimShane
Taylor (as herself)TaylorStarry Skies Sage 1 (Frost)Egregious OneCoolio (Frost)WayneTerravolt (Spark) ---- Volcannon (Ember) ----
Croavenom (Toxin) ---- Atlex ---- WalterWayneCorinth ---- Lily Osbourne ----
Adrian Kosugi ---- Lydia Kosugi ---- Siobhán Kosugi ---- Sandy Lendedge ---- Hunter LendedgeWayne
Selena Daria ---- Ayla the puppyPolarisRosie ---- Starry Skies Sage 2 (Frost)Egregious OneNarrator ----
Frost Forest Tablets ---- Inoratu ---- ? ? ? ? ---- ? ? ? ? ---- SofiaShane
Sakura ---- Piccolo * ---- Miles Edgeworth * ---- Kori * ---- Roan (letter) ----
Vera (Chanelle) (Frost) ---- Emma (Chanelle) (Ember) ---- Lyra (Chanelle) (Spark) ---- Grizelda (Chanelle) (Toxin) ---- Ariaju ----

* They may make an appearance in the mod... provided I'm lazy enough to sprite them. :P

NOTES FROM SHANE:
NOTE: you can mouse over the acronyms. :P
NOTE 2: all characters with a ---- under the Dialogue Writer column have their current dialogues written by me or Taylor, although people complain that everyone sounds the same. Hence, this thread exists to "purge" the characters of their current dialogue, and give them better ones instead. :P
NOTE 3: characters that already have "official" Dialogue Writers can not be selected. Official Dialogue Writers are in italics.
NOTE 4: characters who represent people who helped out on the mods in the credits will always write the dialogue of the characters representing them. In other words, Richard's dialogue will always be written by KarjamP, Taylor's dialogue will always be written by Taylor, and so on.
NOTE 5: The "Cthulhu" are not going to be named as such, however, I have yet to think up a new name for 'em. In the original Cave Story, they're basically humans who give information and are older than they appear. In this mod, they sort-of do the same. They will be named "Sages" in Frost, "Wise Ones" in Ember, "Genii" in Spark and "Philosophers" in Toxin. Note that all "Cthulhu" (as they shall be called in general) will count as one character in terms of dialogue.
NOTE 6: Helping out with dialogue? Every person who helps out with dialogue has a maximum limit of seven characters, at the moment. Version exclusive characters do not count, however - so it's possible for one person to do the dialogue of all Sages, Wise Ones, Genii and Philosophers. See above table to see who appears in what versions.
NOTE 7: The Frost Forest Tablets were carved by the Sages.
NOTE 8: Since Chanelle is actually an antagonist, I figured it'd be useful to give her impostors. Each version has a different minion of Pacen. As of version 0.3, Vera-Chanelle makes a minor appearance. Where? I'll not say. :P


NOTES FROM TAYLOR:
NOTE: Please do not let the characters use swear words or NSFW words. After all, the mod is supposed to be playable for all or something like that.


CHARACTER LIST:
A list of characters with dialogue. Something like that. Names in bold are members of this forum, while names in bold italics are people who are members at other forums but not these forums.

Shane: Shané; Shane; Kim
KarjamP: The Purple Karjam; Richard
Taylor: A Virtual Quest hero; A Virtual Quest heroine; Gas Mask Girl 1; Taylor
Polaris: Chanelle; Kairi; Ayla the puppy; Sparkle; Riley
Egregious One: Starry Skies Sage 1; Zexion Uchiha; Starry Skies Sage 2; Sousuke Sagara; Mystery Mines Sage
XiphosOrochi666: NoxiCritter King
Wayne: Coolio; Walter; Hunter Lendedge


IMPORTANT NOTE:
Um. Due to contradictions and such, I may have to make large changes to this post and the mod.
« Last Edit: November 14, 2013, 12:10:05 pm by Shane »
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Re: Dialogue Help
« Reply #1 on: April 26, 2013, 10:59:08 am »
I'd like to do the hero and heroine of A Virtual Quest and one of the gas masked girls, please.

If you plan to add me as a character, I'd obviously like to do my own dialogue, and if you do plan to add me, use one of the spritesets I made you do for the character of my mod.
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Re: Dialogue Help
« Reply #2 on: April 26, 2013, 11:41:17 am »
If no-one else has problems with you doing the hero and heroine's dialogues, and the antagonist, then I'll update the table.
That way, it's better to avoid wars. :P
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Re: Dialogue Help
« Reply #3 on: April 27, 2013, 10:04:19 pm »
Taylor has been added as the writers of the (would-be) heroes of AVQ and one of the antagonists.

Is there anyone else who's going to help out?
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Re: Dialogue Help
« Reply #4 on: April 28, 2013, 11:24:25 am »
Cthulhu, eh? :P


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Re: Dialogue Help
« Reply #5 on: April 28, 2013, 12:54:19 pm »
That's what they're called in the translation, they're not really creatures like that. Older than Jenka, yes, but they appear human. :P

I'm still thinking on giving them different names though. Maybe they're "Sages". Or "Wise Ones". Either way, they're still unnamed.
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Re: Dialogue Help
« Reply #6 on: April 28, 2013, 12:59:15 pm »
I was only joking. :P


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Re: Dialogue Help
« Reply #7 on: April 28, 2013, 01:03:59 pm »
I know. >:P
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Re: Dialogue Help
« Reply #8 on: May 04, 2013, 03:32:54 pm »
Why's a puppy up there?
Also, why're the Cthulhu called "Pies" in Toxin? XD
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Re: Dialogue Help
« Reply #9 on: May 04, 2013, 07:49:16 pm »
Why's a puppy up there?
Also, why're the Cthulhu called "Pies" in Toxin? XD
Because "ARF!" :P

As for the Pies, I don't know either. ^_^"
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Re: Dialogue Help
« Reply #10 on: May 07, 2013, 10:08:01 am »
Alright, y'all, the dialogue has been posted! I repeat, the dialogue has been posted!

See this thread for details. (Link)
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Re: Dialogue Help
« Reply #11 on: May 07, 2013, 08:13:34 pm »
I can help with more dialogue, if You want.

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Re: Dialogue Help
« Reply #12 on: May 07, 2013, 09:17:32 pm »
That'd be nice, thanks!
Just say who (in the first post) you'd like to help with dialogue, if they have no official dialogue writer (those who have none are written with ----).

Also Rosie (as a boss) will have her dialogue remain, because it sounds feral. "You no take starflower" while the music stops suddenly sounds pretty scary to me, but that's just me.
Her boss theme will be a HH BG Battle for now, although that theme is going to be mainly Coolio's battle theme (NoxiCritter X uses Gigantic Boss).

Maybe I ought to add a few more ORGs? I have 18 unused ORGs so far.

17, if I consider giving Eclaire her own boss theme. Or his own. Or its own. Eclaire appears in version 0.3, I hope.
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Re: Dialogue Help
« Reply #13 on: May 08, 2013, 04:17:50 am »
Who is Walter and Hunter? I could take 'em two.

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« Reply #14 on: May 08, 2013, 07:01:37 am »
Okay, how could I help?


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Re: Dialogue Help
« Reply #15 on: May 08, 2013, 08:21:45 am »

Who is Walter and Hunter? I could take 'em two.
Walter and Hunter are two characters that Taylor sprited and gave placeholder dialogue (i.e. temporary dialogue in case nobody rewrites the dialogue).
Walter is a coward whose hair was dyed pink by a Blue Mage named Corinth. He has one wing, so it is still unknown whether he's human or not. However, he is classified as human for now.
Hunter is an ill girl who, along with her sister Sandy, went to a place called Virus Village. She has purple hair (that is natural).


Just rewrite the dialogue of the characters and post it in here. Add the map script's filename (i.e. "e_Jenk.tsc" for the Dev Room - I kinda forgot to add the character representing you, so I'll use Randolf's sprites from SCS1 unless you have a different character that I should use to represent you) and use the [ code ] [ /code ] tags with the new dialogue of the characters. It can even be something entirely different from what Taylor gave them temporarily. ;)


In the case of the character representing you, he just has no dialogue for now. :P


Walter and Hunter both appear in the following maps:
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MHouse2.tsc

Okay, how could I help?
If I remember correctly, you said you'd only write the dialogue of Richard and the Purple Karjam.
Anyway, just rewrite the dialogue of those two characters (whether it's in-character or out-of-character, since Frost/Ember/Spark/Toxin takes place inside Shané's subconscious) and post it in here. Add the map script's filename (i.e. "e_Jenk.tsc" for the Dev Room) and use the [ code ] [ /code ] tags with the new dialogue of your characters. It can even be something entirely different from what I gave them temporarily. :P


Richard appears in the following maps:
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e_Jenk.tsc
Chako.tsc
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Purple Karjam appears in the following maps:
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The default dialogues can be found at HopeOfShanei/Frost/Dialogue (yes, that's the thread's name where the dialogue is). :P
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Re: Dialogue Help
« Reply #16 on: May 08, 2013, 10:23:23 am »
Dialog alterations so far:

Richard "KarjamP" de Goede:

Represents KarjamP. Also appears in the intro cutscene.

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RICHARD: I guess this world's part of Variant 0. //original

RICHARD: This appears to be in the same world as the Dragon Rider series. //Altered

RICHARD: This appears to be in the same world as the Shane's Cave Story series. //Variant


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//original

< The Purple Karjam appears - yes, he's sort-of important to the story >

PURPLE KARJAM: Quote and Curly did manage to evacuate the city, but sadly, Nega-Lime Karjam destroyed it before the two robots could escape.

KAIRI: Figured you'd show up in time. What brings you here?

PURPLE KARJAM: I suspect that the mysterious disappearance of Shané could, perhaps, be linked to a plot of Nega-Lime Karjam.

SERENITY: Huh. Well, who knows...

PURPLE KARJAM: ... Of course, who knows what Author Shane is planning. For all we know, it could end up to be some guy named Pacen.

KAIRI: Pacen's the Dark One, if I remember correctly...

SERENITY: Let's just work on rebuilding the town. Could you help out, Purple?

PURPLE KARJAM: If I did, everyone would have become lazy eventually. It's best not to let THAT happen, though.

KAIRI: El, oh, el.

SERENITY: Was that supposed to be "lol"?

KAIRI: Yes. I'm just horrible at that kind of thing.

//altered

KAIRI: Quote and Curly died trying to stop that green guy from... well, destroying a Surfacian city, right?

< The Purple Karjam appears - yes, he's sort-of important to the story >

PURPLE KARJAM: Those two robots did managed to evacuate the city. Unfortunately, Nega-lime destroyed it before they could get out themselves

KAIRI: Figured you'd show up in time. What brings you here?

PURPLE KARJAM: I think Shané’s disappearance could be link to Nega-Lime’s current plot.

SERENITY: Huh. Well, who knows...

PURPLE KARJAM: ...Yeah. Who knows what the Author of this story’s planning. In fact, it could even be a guy named Pacen who could’ve done it.

KAIRI: Pacen's the Dark One, if I remember correctly...

SERENITY: Let's just work on rebuilding the town. Could you help out, Purple?

PURPLE KARJAM: Sorry, but I would only use my powers to help you if there’s no other choice. I want others to figure stuff out for themselves lest they
become entirely dependant on me to do everything. It’s best to not let that happen.

KAIRI: El, oh, el.

SERENITY: Was that supposed to be "lol"?

KAIRI: Yes. I'm just horrible at that kind of thing.



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< camera focuses on the Purple Karjam >

//Altered

?: Is it ready?

PURPLE KARJAM: Not yet. I couldn't find her.

?: Shané?

PURPLE KARJAM: Yes. She's been gone since two days ago, and I can't seem to find her.

?: Have you tried looking in the ground

PURPLE KARJAM: I don't think she'd be buried.

?: I have reason to suspect that she's in a secret cave, so consealed that even we couldn't find her.

< ground shakes >

?: What the heck?

PURPLE KARJAM: It looks like a cavern is rising over there!

?: Maybe Shané's there?

PURPLE KARJAM: Well, my senses are failing me there, so that could be true.

PURPLE KARJAM: It's possible that the place's enchanted to conceal any form of life there

?: Are you going to rush now, PK?

PURPLE KARJAM: You're Joking, Richard.

RICHARD: I know. What's that behind you?

< Purple Karjam takes two steps right >

PURPLE KARJAM: That's wierd. My sensor's failing me over there as well.

RICHARD: So what now?

< Purple Karjam turns around >

PURPLE KARJAM: Well, I could always work around needing to search in two locations by sending a clone to one and me going another way

RICHARD: That's great! Let’s get going now!

PURPLE KARJAM: Okay, Mr. Impatient.

//Original

< camera focuses on the Purple Karjam >

?: Is it ready?

PURPLE KARJAM: Not yet. I can't find her.

?: Shané?

PURPLE KARJAM: Yes. She's been missing since two days ago, and I've been unable to find her since then.

?: Have you tried looking under the ground?

PURPLE KARJAM: I don't think she's buried.

?: I have reason to suspect that she's inside a secret cave, so well-hidden that not even we can find her.

< ground shakes >

?: What the?

PURPLE KARJAM: It looks like a cavern of some sort is rising up over there!

?: Maybe Shané's there?

PURPLE KARJAM: Well, I can't sense anything inside, so maybe that's true.

PURPLE KARJAM: Maybe there's some sort of sspell on it that... prevents us from detecting life forms in there?

?: Aren't you going to hurry up?

PURPLE KARJAM: You're not serious, Richard.

RICHARD: I know. And what's that?

PURPLE KARJAM: Huh?

RICHARD: Behind you?

< Purple Karjam takes two steps right >

PURPLE KARJAM: That's new! I can't sense any life forms there, either!

RICHARD: So now what?

< Purple Karjam turns around >

PURPLE KARJAM: Well, I can always send a clone to that area, and then go to those caves myself.

RICHARD: That's a good idea. So get going already!

PURPLE KARJAM: Wow, talk about impatient...



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//original

RICHARD: You did a good job in stopping the Critter invasion...

RICHARD: I wonder why they wore those weird masks, though.

//altered

RICHARD: You did a great job stopping those Critters

RICHARD: Those weird masks cause me to wonder what were they going to do...



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//original

PURPLE KARJAM: Hi! I'm the Purple Karjam.

PURPLE KARJAM: I would have been across the lake in the full version of this mod, but Author Shane has instead decided

to move me here.

PURPLE KARJAM: His laziness is worse than that of one of my friends, from Esiësia.

//altered

PURPLE KARJAM: Hello! I'm the Purple Karjam.

PURPLE KARJAM: In the full version of this mod, I would be across the lake, but Author Shane had decided to instead put me here.

PURPLE KARJAM: He’s even lazier than one of my friends from Esiësia.



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//original

RICHARD: Stupid earthquakes. Author Shane never told me that those would happen, either!

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RICHARD: darn earthquakes! Author Shane never mentioned these two!



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PURPLE KARJAM: Okay, so Author Shane is NOT as lazy as I thought he was.

PURPLE KARJAM: He's still lazy, though.

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PURPLE KARJAM: I stand corrected about how big Author Shane’s laziness is.

PURPLE KARJAM: He’s still at least a bit lazy, of course.

EDIT BY SHANE:
The layout of the page due to the Code BBCode was sort-of annoying me.
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Re: Dialogue Help
« Reply #17 on: May 08, 2013, 03:53:13 pm »
Why'd you give the dialogue threads directories? :P

Is that a result of TV Tropes ruining your life?
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Re: Dialogue Help
« Reply #18 on: May 08, 2013, 07:46:35 pm »
Why'd you give the dialogue threads directories? :P

Is that a result of TV Tropes ruining your life?
Out of boredom :P
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Re: Dialogue Help
« Reply #19 on: May 09, 2013, 05:17:11 am »
I'll send you new sprites soon! I don't want Mixer8421 anymore, I want Randolf!

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Re: Dialogue Help
« Reply #20 on: May 09, 2013, 11:23:33 am »
C'n'I ask if the "Frost cave being a bad omen" thing is a running gag? :P
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Re: Dialogue Help
« Reply #21 on: May 09, 2013, 08:04:40 pm »
I'll send you new sprites soon! I don't want Mixer8421 anymore, I want Randolf!
Roger that.

C'n'I ask if the "Frost cave being a bad omen" thing is a running gag? :P
Well, it's supposed to. Riley's an old guy after all.
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Re: Dialogue Help
« Reply #22 on: May 28, 2013, 11:30:30 am »
... Is it even possible for someone with one arm to replace a lot of dialogue? o_O

I've finished replacing Richard and Purple Karjam's dialogues, by the way.
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« Reply #23 on: May 28, 2013, 04:15:47 pm »
... Is it even possible for someone with one arm to replace a lot of dialogue? o_O

I've finished replacing Richard and Purple Karjam's dialogues, by the way.
... Whoa...

And yay.
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Re: Dialogue Help
« Reply #24 on: June 12, 2013, 04:14:30 am »
Hey. If it's no problem, I'd like to write foooor:

Ayla The Puppy,
Kairi,
Channelle,
Riley,
And Sparkle.

I've never really tried this sort of thing before, but I'll see what I can do. :)

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Re: Dialogue Help
« Reply #25 on: June 12, 2013, 09:10:53 am »
Hey. If it's no problem, I'd like to write foooor:

Ayla The Puppy,
Kairi,
Channelle,
Riley,
And Sparkle.

I've never really tried this sort of thing before, but I'll see what I can do. :)
It's no problem at all! :)
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Re: Dialogue Help
« Reply #26 on: August 21, 2013, 10:30:19 pm »
Okay, right now I'm working on another dialogue dump. (Although I'm doing it with one hand this time, so it's gonna take me longer to do than last time.) Ergo, this thread is obsolete for now. The moment I'm finished with the dialogue dump (i.e. rewriting it into Notepad), I'll update that thread.

Of course, since I can't use both hands, my right hand will tire faster than usual if I just keep typing non-stop. Thus, I'll take breaks now and then.

That is all I'll be saying now. Wish me luck, I suppose!

By the way, if anyone wants to change who they "voice" or anything, just say so.
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Re: Dialogue Help
« Reply #27 on: September 12, 2013, 02:41:31 pm »
First things first.
This is (technically) my first time working on a video game mod, so... it's going to be glitched a lot.

At the moment, Taylor's working on the dialogue extraction (because I have absolutely no idea how it was done). Thanks goes to her for that.
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Re: Dialogue Help
« Reply #28 on: September 13, 2013, 06:49:49 pm »
First things first.
This is (technically) my first time working on a video game mod, so... it's going to be glitched a lot.
Uh, no.
Beta Testers can help you out with that :)

At the moment, Taylor's working on the dialogue extraction (because I have absolutely no idea how it was done). Thanks goes to her for that.
No problem.
I'll try to finish it before 2014 begins, but I can't promise anything.
The game has so much dialogue that it'll take a while.
And I can't rush it, for fear of spelling mistakes.
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Re: Dialogue Help
« Reply #29 on: November 14, 2013, 11:59:16 am »
I'll do Irma, Adriana, and the second gas-mask girl's dialogue, if you don't mind.


I may be scared of gas masks, but it doesn't stop me from helping with dialogue, right?


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Re: Dialogue Help
« Reply #30 on: November 14, 2013, 12:08:22 pm »
I'll do Irma, Adriana, and the second gas-mask girl's dialogue, if you don't mind.
Um.
I've noticed a contradiction: Irma and Adriana are already mentioned there; meaning that they have two dialogue helpers. :o

I may be scared of gas masks, but it doesn't stop me from helping with dialogue, right?
You're scared of those things too?
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Re: Dialogue Help
« Reply #31 on: November 14, 2013, 01:53:55 pm »
I'll do Irma, Adriana, and the second gas-mask girl's dialogue, if you don't mind.
Um.
I've noticed a contradiction: Irma and Adriana are already mentioned there; meaning that they have two dialogue helpers. :o
Oh...
Well, once that is fixed...
I'll decide then...

I may be scared of gas masks, but it doesn't stop me from helping with dialogue, right?
You're scared of those things too?
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